FALCON'S PREY
Author.
Singer. Motivational Speaker. Even though she's only 15 years old, Kristina Coia
already includes these titles on her resume!
If you've ever aspired to be a writer, this Marlton,
New Jersey high school sophomore's real-life story
should be just the inspiration you need to realize
you CAN do it!
Kristina has always enjoyed reading and writing and
by freshman year had penned Falcon's Prey!
The book is a thrilling fantasy novel, in which a
princess embarks on a journey of self-discovery and
love through a land filled with treachery and hate.
It is designed for teen girls. The book teaches an
underlying message of self-esteem and self-respect.
Thanks to Kristina, we have the following excerpt to
whet your whistle for both the book and for
following your dreams!
The following is an excerpt from Falcon's Prey.
Once upon a time there were two kingdoms separated
only by a mysterious range of mountains. No one from
either land dared to travel over these mountains or
deep into the forests that led to them because of
the myths and legends that whispered dangers down
through the ages. The only safe course was a narrow
passage between the mountains. The passage was
easily accessible to each side and was frequently
traveled. The first kingdom, Prantarr, was abundant
with goods. Their people were strong and powerful
and felt dominant over their neighboring land,
Delmaa. This land was poor, with survival only made
possible by their trade with Prantarr. Traded items
between the two lands included fruits, vegetables,
horses, cloth, and wood from Prantarr, while the
Delmish exchanged only a few tawdry weapons and
other metal tools. Prantarrians did not require any
of what Delmaa had to give, for theirs was an
abundant land. The people of Prantarr lived
lavishly, were sometimes wasteful, and were unaware
of any danger from Delmaa, as they thought the
people there were weak and vulnerable. They had long
since formed an alliance with Delmaa, which had
continued for many years with peace throughout the
lands.
This peaceful existence changed abruptly when months
of unprecedented rainfall caused a landslide of mud
and rock which soon closed off the only means of
commerce between the two. Without their safe
passage, who would dare venture over the mountains
and face the unknown dangers to get to the other
side?
The king of Prantarr knew very well how dependent
the Delmish people were on his kingdom. He thought
carefully about the state of Delmaa and knew its
people would not survive for very long without the
aid of Prantarr's resources. As king, this decision
was difficult, but one he had to make. The king sent
out a proclamation that no Prantarrian life would be
jeopardized in an effort to venture over the
mountains. The dangers were much too great. The
king's decision distressed the people of Prantarr as
well as himself, but he was sure in his command.
Delmaa would now have to survive on its own, without
the help of its long-time friend.
Knowing the strength and power of Prantarr, the
Delmish people and their king waited anxiously for
their neighbor to find a way to reach them. As time
passed, their people began to starve. Even the
strongest grew weaker and death came from both
starvation and disease. Soon the hunger turned to
anger and the anger to hatred against their
neighbor. The Delmish knew the Prantarrians were
aware of what they were going through. The demise of
Delmaa was inevitable without their help, yet
Prantarr chose to abandon Delmaa rather than aid
them, and they soon realized that they were alone.
The future now was in their own hands. Their king
was tormented over how to help his people. After
much consideration, he made his decision. He would
form an army that would risk all to travel over the
mountains to Prantarr and take from them what they
chose not to share with the less fortunate. He
assembled all Delmish men who were able to stand and
hold a weapon. There were at least thirty thousand
men and boys, some as young as thirteen years of age
and others aged and close to the end of their lives.
Hatred gave each of them renewed strength and
courage. All would risk what life they had left and
put their fears aside to get what was needed from
Prantarr. The wrath of the Delmish people would soon
be upon Prantarr. First, however, they had to
survive the path leading them to their only hope for
survival. Death would come by starvation, war, or of
some unknown evil lurking in the mountains. The
journey began.
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Prantarr was bustling with activity the day the
Delmish arrived. Many soldiers did not survive the
dangerous expedition. The Delmish soldiers never
again spoke of their journey once they reached
Prantarr, for they now had one thing on their
minds-revenge.
The weather that day was warm and sunny, crops were
hearty and abundant in the fields, and children
laughed and played in the streets. As the Delmish
army approached, Prantarr seemed oblivious. The
smell of food and the hope for life were now closer
than they had been in months. The Delmish first
assaulted a market on the outskirts of Prantarr. The
clamor of the market rose unthreatened as the men
moved toward it. The hope that they could save the
lives of their families back home fueled even more
hatred among the soldiers who were once traders and
friends of this land. One by one, they attacked
every Prantarrian they met. They overturned carts
and thrust them aside, set homes ablaze, tortured
merchants and peddlers, and destroyed entire towns
as they marched through the kingdom. It seemed their
hunger for vengeance was never satisfied as they
rampaged, ransacked and pillaged town after town
after town.
The king of Prantarr soon learned of the attacks and
called for his army. Prantarrian soldiers set out to
stop the carnage. Days turned into weeks. Weeks
turned into months. The war, which began without a
warning, now seemed endless.
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